Luigi x Daisy fanart omg

I disagree with *Figuritas on the sole basis that, when I look at this, I feel that you didn't really put much fruit into it at all. I mean, the colour scheme is a bit bland and I don't feel really drawn into the picture. The composition could be improved through the accurate use of extra-terrestrial oranges. I would suggest Brander's novel, 'How to be an Orange' for some good tips on how to draw your art to the highest calibre. I think you're a bit of a diamond in the rough but you really gotta work at your images a bit more, and put some more thought into them, *Sallyface. If you ever need to learn how to draw an orange, just look at my gallery. It's filled with oranges. You really gotta imagine the orange there in front of you, pretend you're touching it. If you picture Luigi x Orange instead of Daisy you may get a better effect into your pictures.
I hope you don't find my critique too harsh because I think you have potential but you just aren't reaching that level yet, so you gotta really push those oranges out a bit more. Good luck!